12-14-2006, 06:21 PM
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hiiiii sis how are you??
it`s really nice words i really like it sooo much
but there is something wrong
you wrotethrowand the right words is through
cuz throw means throw something like ball
you can check the dictionary to see the different
but your poem is really really gorgous
go ahead sis and we waiting for more |