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#7 (**permalink**) 12-15-2006, 12:22 AM

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hiiiii sis how are you??

it`s really nice words i really like it sooo much

but there is something wrong

you wrotethrowand the right words is through

cuz throw means throw something like ball

you can check the dictionary to see the different

but your poem is really really gorgous

go ahead sis and we waiting for more

thanks sis

but sis i mean in that senets ammmmm

throw like the bad time and the cool time we going throw
me and u

that's what i mean

and i don't know if it's wrong or right

but no one cares and tell me about that word

iwish they understand it

buuuuuuuut sis

reaaaaaaaally thanks

cuz u tell me about my faltes

thank u